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Part two of something that looks like it's gonna be a long one.
It's got blood in it so have to rate it.
One of my countless stories about my favourite rogue from WoW.
This is from my own imagination, I chose this way of writing it. I chose to bend the "fantastical reality" just enough to make it suit my fancy. I care about the lore when I play, but in my stories I'm allowed to write as I please.
Don't steal my story. I'll find you and make you watch Avatar for the rest of your life if you do!
It's got blood in it so have to rate it.
One of my countless stories about my favourite rogue from WoW.
This is from my own imagination, I chose this way of writing it. I chose to bend the "fantastical reality" just enough to make it suit my fancy. I care about the lore when I play, but in my stories I'm allowed to write as I please.
Don't steal my story. I'll find you and make you watch Avatar for the rest of your life if you do!
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Hi!
"how much he usually reflects on a situation" - it should be 'reflected' instead of 'reflects' here.
'battle field' is actually battlefield
'fire place' is actually fireplace
It would help if you added a blank line in between paragraphs
Here: "She eyed him nervously; piling dead bodies on top of each other and setting it ablaze wasn't her idea of fun times, nor did she think him so very willing to spend time honouring friends and foes alike in that manner. They weren't out of danger yet.
Together they traversed the vast landscape littered with bodies;"
--The transition is too fast. What happened to get them going?
Other than that, neat work! I liked it.
"how much he usually reflects on a situation" - it should be 'reflected' instead of 'reflects' here.
'battle field' is actually battlefield
'fire place' is actually fireplace
It would help if you added a blank line in between paragraphs
Here: "She eyed him nervously; piling dead bodies on top of each other and setting it ablaze wasn't her idea of fun times, nor did she think him so very willing to spend time honouring friends and foes alike in that manner. They weren't out of danger yet.
Together they traversed the vast landscape littered with bodies;"
--The transition is too fast. What happened to get them going?
Other than that, neat work! I liked it.